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2008-07-20 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: comments please...on here! damn....
2008-07-22 [LunaKat]: yummy
oh my yes
2008-07-22 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: well im glad you liked it, im getting allot better reviews than my first story got
2008-07-22 [LunaKat]: what's your first story?
2008-07-22 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: the day after about the same girl too, we had a rough end...
2008-07-24 [Misanthropy]: pretty good. A few spelling errors, but no points against you for those. XD I did kind of get lost a couple times because the lines are all packed together so tight. I read a couple lines twice by accident. lol. but other than layout, twas good *thumbs up*
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